Budding Songwritte here, Can anyone read my lyrics and tell me what they think please thank you Options

[Kyle1992]

Happy ever after

I'm looking at you
and i like what i see
feelings so pure
feelings so sweet
It was about time
you swept me of my feet
and about time you kissed
me on the cheek
and about time you said
i love you to me
it was about time i met
a man like you

These feelings are right
deep down inside

I'm gonna have my happy ever after
gonna get the love i've yearned for
all my life
gonna get my happy ever after
get the love i've waited for
all my life
now i've got the love that's mine
finally i've got my happy ever after

I'm looking in your eyes
your striking blue eyes
i know i have found my mr right
and he'll make everything alright
i have found my number one
and i'll never let you go

These feelings are right
deep down inside

I'm gonna have my happy ever after
gonna get the love i've yerned for
all my life
gonna get my happy ever after
get the love i've waited for
all my life
now i've got the love that's mine
finally gonna get my happy ever after

As i lay beside you
in the morning light
as i watch you sleep
my love for you is so deep down
inside

I'm gonna have my happy ever after
gonna get the love i've yerned for
all my life
gonna get my happy ever after
finally got the man i've dreamt
for all my life
finally i have got my happy ever after
finally i have found my happy ever after

(please tell me what you think i need help with my songwritting)